Maybe, My Slump is gone.

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Jack Tommins is an average guy. He has an average office job. He lives an average life. Except that he is full of greed. He sees things on other people. He wants them. He sees things in windows. He covets them. He sees things. He takes them. Jack has an entire house full of things that he does not need. He has rooms full of things he doesn't even know he has.
On an average day, this average man with the average job and the average life notices a homeless man on the side of the road who warns him of his greed, and warns him of spots that will appear and take over his life if he does not rid his life of greed. Jack believes this man is crazy as he buys himself a nine dollar cup of coffee. Later that morning he notices a dark spot upon the top of his right hand. He washes it away, thinking nothing of it. Later that day at the office a coworker points it out. He claims it is an ink spill, and wipes it away once more.
On his way home he stops at the same coffee shop and buys himself another nine dollar cup of coffee. The Homeless man lays on the corner dead. Jack dismisses it, and believes the man had it coming to him.
He continues to wipe away the spot for the rest of the night as he buys things on the shopping channel, and online.
The next morning he is covered in the dark mark. His body has aged and he finds taht he is starving, but no food can fixate his hunger. His body wants to be filled with goodness, but Jack does not realize this and only fills his body with more things and greed.